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Jeremy Friesen

When I was looking at the projects, it was unclear your role; when I clicked on your GitHub profile I could see that you were the creator. I think tightening up your descriptions would help.

Maybe a bit of an "opening sentence" explaining the Projects? Also, I'm uncertain if your free time personal projects should be before your work experience.

Below are some recommendations to consider:

Introduction wording

Before

Kumar Deepanshu is a software engineer who loves building applications using JavaScript technologies. Currently, He is focused on building web applications using Reactjs, Express, MongoDB, Node, Solidity, and similar development tools. He is also working on open-source projects in his free time, which can be evidently seen through his GitHub profile.

After

Kumar Deepanshu is a software engineer that loves building applications. He is focused on building JavaScript-based web applications using Reactjs, Express, MongoDB, Node, Solidity, and similar development tools. In his free time, works on open-source projects which can be seen on his GitHub profile.

From a "UI" standpoint, I'm not a fan of the project descriptions being links.

DEV.UI wording

Before

DevUI is a free and open source developer toolkit. It is a set of React Components and Templates that aim to be fully accessible and customizable in order to speed up the development process.

After

A set free and open source accessible and customizable React Components and Templates that accelerate the development process.

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Kumar Deepanshu

Thank you so much man, I will make all the changes which you have suggested. 🤗🤗🤗