Thanks for sharing your experience. The first part was unfortunate to read, but eventually, I got the end. I am happy that everything is going well at your end.
A couple of things I will suggest for your article. It is great putting all the details, but I feel you cramp everything into it. It is hard to read.
Try to reduce and break the article into sections that will allow readers to skim what you wrote.
Hi Maxim,
Thanks for sharing your experience. The first part was unfortunate to read, but eventually, I got the end. I am happy that everything is going well at your end.
A couple of things I will suggest for your article. It is great putting all the details, but I feel you cramp everything into it. It is hard to read.
Try to reduce and break the article into sections that will allow readers to skim what you wrote.
Can't wait to see the next update.
Yeah, good point. I was trying to avoid unnecessary details but looks like I didn't succeed in it haha
I've just tried to remove a few sentences, thanks for advice!