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Discussion on: The Story Behind My First Project.

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Daragh Byrne

Looks really great, and a very interesting and inspiring story.

I'd suggest having a think about your Calls to Action - the banner headlines. They are a bit generic - "Share with us your Thoughts" could really be "Share your recipes and gluten free stories" for example - a bit more direct and relevant. The user needs to know immediately what benefits they will receive by joining your community. The "Gluten Free Recipes" page is much better!

The site looks great and it sounds like you've learned a lot, well done!

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Amine

You're right, we should improve our copy. Thanks for the kind words.