I agree, i wanted to through that thoughts out of my mind first, then improve it later. i'm good with writing well organized articles, and i will pull that out for sure, just because i was always procrastinating to write articles, i had to fast do that. but thanks for the great note my friend
But have a look at some first-person pronouns, in some instances you are using capital letter I (correct) and others small letter i. The former is recommended while the latter is not.
I would reformat this and add some paragraphs - it’s borderline impossible to follow.
I’m sure you have a good story to tell but very few people are going to read this from start to finish I’m sorry to say.
+1
I made changes, thanks for the suggestion
I agree, i wanted to through that thoughts out of my mind first, then improve it later. i'm good with writing well organized articles, and i will pull that out for sure, just because i was always procrastinating to write articles, i had to fast do that. but thanks for the great note my friend
Nice work on the reformatting.
But have a look at some first-person pronouns, in some instances you are using capital letter I (correct) and others small letter i. The former is recommended while the latter is not.
sure thanks, i will try to improve it again.
probably this is my first English Article at all
I am sure you can do better.
yup thanks body