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Discussion on: Sharing my first personal website

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Derek D

The design is nice and flows well, though you might want to tighten up the text-heavy first section, maybe break it up into smaller, more digestible pieces throughout the page. Also - if you intend to showcase your skills in English, you might want to have someone proofread it before sending it to an employer, as there are quite a bit of typos and grammatical errors ;)

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Mazen Touati • Edited

Thanks Derek, i'll consider re-making the first section.
And yeah i already noticed some typos, i'll double check the proofing and push the changes.

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jules manson

Nice catch on the proof reading.