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Jonathan Nicholas

Here's mine.

Any feedback is highly appreciated!

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rhymes

Old school, nice!

Just put the work experience at the top.

I would put stuff in this order: work experience, skills, education, awards and scholarship and then volounteering experience

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Michelle Epps

I have a bit of a different perspective but that’s the beautiful thing about these exercises! Also, remember it’s improtant to tailor your resume to the opportunity you are pursuing...

I like the old school vibe! I give advice to put your most impactful “experience” at the top - for you at this moment, it’s your eduction. That will shift! Also, I would remove the line in the middle of each experience regarding positive feedback prior to departure and much like you’ve seen in other feedbacks on here - add the “so what” instead. What business or technology outcomes resulted. That will be more impactful.

Great job representing yourself overall!

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rhymes

Great feedback! :-)

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Jonathan Nicholas

Great feedback from both of you! I really appreciate it.