Since this article is all about writing, I wanted to give you a little bit of feedback. I've been following you for a few weeks and one thing I've noticed is that you tend to separate sentences into individual paragraphs. I would suggest instead joining related sentences into longer form paragraphs, giving more structure to related information and only giving the reader a break, less often, when the subject changes.
Cheers!
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Since this article is all about writing, I wanted to give you a little bit of feedback. I've been following you for a few weeks and one thing I've noticed is that you tend to separate sentences into individual paragraphs. I would suggest instead joining related sentences into longer form paragraphs, giving more structure to related information and only giving the reader a break, less often, when the subject changes.
Cheers!
Interesting I'll consider it in joining it together to make a longer paragraph.
It sort of reminds me of research papers with longer paragraphs. Nevertheless it's good feedback.
+1